Unexpected
Author: Fuzzy
From: Deni, Australia
Age: 11
Date: 6th Dec 2001, 9:32 PM
Rating: 5
Comment:
Title: Unexpected
As I walked into a cave I saw two beedy eyes looking at me.
But they weren't your normal eyes.
They were a dark shade of red, staring out at me, reaching my heart, peircing a hole right through it.
I was scared out of my wits I could nearly pee my pants.
Because it wasn't just the eyes that were freaking me out.
There was a low, grunting sound, and then deep, sharp breaths.
I whimpered into a clump.
I tried to open my mouth to scream but nothing came out.
I struggled to get up. It was hard to be fixed on the eyes and pull myself up at the same time.
I still don't know how I did it but I fought up the courage to yell
'Come out and.. and- face me like a man!'
Picking up a stick that was near my foot I got ready for the worst.
I started to say my last words.
'I'm sorry for all the times I've been mean to anyone, I'm sorry for all the times I'd gotten mad at my-'
To my suprise there was a faint ..... had I heard correctly?
Yes, I had.
Someone was in there, lughing.
But it wasn't a cold laugh, it was a full, boyish laugh. I couldn't put my finger on it, but I think I've heard that laugh before.
I rushed up to the cave entrance but what I saw didn't suprise me in the leatest.
My eldest brother was in there, lying on the floor, holding on to his stomsch, laughing his head off.
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