The Ghost

Author: Froggy
From: Lake View, USA
Age: 17
Date: 12th Dec 2001, 12:39 AM
Rating: 5
Comment:
Title: The Ghost

As I walked into the cave I felt a drift come in. I hadn't remembered it being windy outside. The letter said to meet there at exactly 7:00 pm. It was now 6:59. Suddenly I heard a noise that sound like scraping sounds. I knew that it had to be Kenya. So I said,'Kenya, is that you?' No answer. I said it again, still no answer. Then there was a loud thud. I ran into the side cave where I heard the sound, and I saw my best friend lying there, covered with blood. I shook with terrorized fright. My mind was asking alot of questions like:Why, who, how? I started to run out of the cave, but was stop short by a figure hiding in the dark. Who could it be? What could it be? I turned ran past the figure and out of the mouth of the cave. who ever it was came up behind me running faster that I could breathe. It was darker outside and I could barely see a thing. The grab me from behind and I fell, and they fell on top. I looked up and saw Kenya, out of breath and panting loudly. 'Why did you run?' She managed to get out. 'But I--I saw...,' My sentence broke. 'Oh, you saw the blood?' She broke her sentence. 'That was a deer I found and I was repairing its leg.' Relief over flowed my body and we walked back to the cave. But something seemed strange. Where was Kenya when I called her, and who was in the shadows of the cave? These thoughts ran through my mind and I couldn't bare to sleep that night. Suddenly I heard a noise while I was sleeping in my sleeping bag. Then I saw her. My mouth formed a perfect 'o'. She was standing there brushing her hair, looking through a little hand held mirror. But what I saw reflecting in the mirror was not Kenya's face, it was a skeleton. Not Kenya. So that really was her that ws covered in blood, so who was in the shadows? Just then I felt a blade go deep down into my backbone. I felt droswy and I passed out. I fell asleep for what seemed like a long time, and when I woke up I saw what I see now, just black and the smell of dirt. When will I come out of this coma? And who did this too me? I say it's just another unsolved mystery.


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