Critique

Author: Megan
From: New Berlin, USA
Age: 13
Date: 16th Jan 2002, 12:40 PM
Rating: 5
Comment:
Title: Critique

Nothing's important in your eyes,
Your eyes are yours alone,
The world is shown in a different way,
Events signifigant shown,

Everything else is blotted out,
With your giant red marking pen,
No matter how I cry or shout,
You just yell at me then,

I envy those who cherish,
Others joys and fears,
I beg and hope and wish,
I'll learn to over the years,

I can see that spot missing,
In me within my heart,
It's blotting out dreams,
Why did it ever start?


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