Rock Slide
Author: Marianna
From: Boones mill, USA
Age: 10
Date: 4th Mar 2002, 11:07 AM
Rating: 5
Comment:
Title: Rock Slide
There once was a girl named Dillon Capressee. She was a small girl for her age,she was 12 and she was 4'2. She didn't have any friends and one day Mrs.Coccee said,'Listen up children, we are going on a feild trip to a cave.' Please bring in these permision slips for me by NEXT Monday, Thank you.' She also said ,'Please, if your parent signed up pick a friend and your Mom or dad will chaperone.' Right then Dillon asked to go to the facility and when she did she cried so long Mrs. Boggisen,the school nurse, had to go in and get her. Mrs.Coccee said she would assign her partner. That Monday Dillon's mom said she wanted that little girl named Caytilen, Mrs. Coccee said that would be O.K.of course Caytilen had to want to be with Dillon, Caytilen said, 'YES!'
We were getting ready to get of the bus and Mrs. Coccee said,'STICK WITH YOUR CHAPERONE!'
My mom took Caytilen and me and we toured around untill we looked what time it was and it was 4:30. We were supposed to load at 3:30, mom got frantic, we are in another state lost, no transportation,no food,and most of all no blankets. Mom started yelling and Caytilen and I chipped in. We were all yelling, 'Hello, Help, follow our voices!' Later, around 7:30 it started getting dark, Caytilen and I were so hungry. We were looking around we saw tons of animals, but we didn't have anything to kill it with. We kept walking untill it got to dark. We stopped at a tree and slept. The next morning at 7:00 we all started walking again, we stopped and stared in amazment for a long,long time. Finally, we walked into the cave. We got really cold, mom found a boat and looked around. There was a knapsack in the boat. Mom said that there was candy and cookis in the sack. When we got on the boat Caytilen slept while mom and I talked about how we missed Zachary, my baby brother. He was a new born and we really missed him. When I woke up it was raining and I got sort of scared because when you are in a cave the echos make it sound alot louder. We saw something, water was draining in the cave. The water was getting higher, a rock slide just happened, mom and Caytline had gotten stuck. A huge rock fell on Caytilen's leg. And a small one but heavy enough for me not to be able to lift it. I was completly scared, two lives depended on me, Dillon Capressee a 12 year old!
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