Quick and Jack - and the Raptors
Author: Jake again
From: Glenfield, United Kingdom
Age: 6
Date: 24th Mar 2002, 12:59 AM
Rating: 3
Comment:
Title: Quick and Jack - and the Raptors
Quick was in his deck chair eating chips for a supurb breakfast.
'Yummy' chips said Quick.
'Yum yum yummy chicken' replied Jack.
'I hate chips and chicken... what I am a sabortoothed tiger... I love chicken, what was I thinking' thought the sabertoothed tiger watching them.
In the mountains there lived nasty,horrible and greedy raptors. In the caves.
The raptors were having there breakfast to,they had just come down the mountain.
The raptor thought he wanted something else to eat. He was not full up yet. 'I have not had enough food'he thought
Quick heard the Raptors munching and crunching away the stegasaurus. Quick rushed down the hill.
by the time they got there it was gone, all what ws left were rotten bones, Quick, Consognathus and Jack were sad.
They went intothe deep dark forest. It was very scary 'Its verrrry scccccccaary' said Quick!
'AHHHH' said Quick and Jack wer'e sinking in quicksand, good job I have an extra hand now' said Quick.
Jack wanted to kill one of the raptors 'dont Jack'. 'Why shouldn't I ,its fun?'
Jack killed the raptor and the other rators eated the raptor what was killed.
The raptors looked up and saw Quick and jack, it made them jump.
The raptors pounced on to quick and Jack but the raptors missed.
there were 14 raptors in 1 pack they all had nashing teeth. The machine gun did not work so they used the basucka.
'Locked on target!' shouted jack
'OKAY, now... FIRE' Quick screamed
CABOOM.. 'cuver your ears Jack!'
Instead of killing one raptor , it killed 9 or more,
Ther was only 4 raptors left. There was a puff of smoke on both sides.....
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