Guest.part.1
Author: Amanda
From: Gold Coast, Australia
Age: 14
Date: 7th Apr 2002, 7:46 AM
Rating: 5
Comment: This seems much better Amanda. Keep going, but remember get to the point of the story and make it exciting. Editor
Title: Guest.part.1
Billy & Jasmine Sat at the breakfeast table togther eating there coco pops in silence.
Then Billy spoke he said 'Mum can Jasmine & I please go for a walk?'He asked.
'Billy your only 9 but Jasmine you may go for a walk'Said Jessica.
'Ow Mum it's no fair just because she's 13 she can do whatever & i get to be stuck in this dump'Billy yelled.
'Ok alright Jasmine take Billy for a walk please'.
'Owwwww ok'Jasmine sighed.
They walked outside they walked all the way down the left side of the path searching for something to do.
They came across a park with swings and a slide there were three other kids there.
Billy yelled out to Jasmine 'Jasie there's a playground over there'He said pointing at the playground.
'Yeah good were not going it's playgrounds are for four year olds there has to be something better then that to do and who gave YOU permisson to call me Jasie?'Jasmine snapped and kept searching for something to do.
'What's that?'Jasmine asked Billy pointing at a tall whit building with lots of windows on it & a gold Star at the very top of the building.
'Oh hang on why am i asking you your only two!'Jasmine yelled at Billy.
'Im Nine!'Billy yelled back and then a little clear drip fell all over Billy & Jasmine it was a raindrop Rain poured down over them.
Billy said 'I don't know what this is but GO INSIDE!'He yelled Billy & Jasmine grabbed hands and ran inside and looked for a place to hide.
'Here in here'Jasmine yelled & the hid in a small office room with a lot of paper a computer & pens all of over the floor with a bin right next to the computer.
'Cool can i play on the com-'Billy said but Jasmine snapped 'NO! were here to hide from the rain not to play games'.
'But we went walking to find something to do'Billy said But Jasmine ignored him.
'Hmph'Billy sighed.
They sat in silence under the computer table.
They both sighed & sat in silcence dripping wet.
Next thing you know BAM! the door smacks open and someone's walking in.
'JAMES I DON'T LIKE THE WAY THIS MOVIE GOES!'Someone yelled.
'Oh my gosh look who that is'Said Jasmine.
'Who?'Billy asked not instreted.
Who is it? find out in chapter.2
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