Part 1 of the mirror of Erised

Author: Hannah
From: Indiana,muncie, USA
Age: 12
Date: 17th Jul 2002, 4:35 AM
Rating: 2
Comment: This sounds a bit too familiar!! Editor
Title: Part 1 of the mirror of Erised

It was the night after chistmas , Hermione wanted me to look in the Restricted area for a book on Nickolis F. o i put o my invisabity cloak, and walk to the library. As i walk to the Restricted area i opened my cloak and opend a book, it had a mans face coming out of it screaming. I shut the book as fast as i could. I heard Mr. Felch ask is anyone there????,i put the cloak back on and as i ran away i Knocked over my lantern. I just ran and as i turend the corner thinking nobody was there i saw Snape and Qurrio . Snape was holding Qurrio up aginst a book case by his neck,all i heard was you know perfickty well what im talking about, and i frogot i had a cold and that i had been breathing to loud. Snape heard me and i covered my mouth and walked back . Felch came up to both the teachers and said' i found this in the resticted area that means a students out of bed. They all ran,and i walked into a door and i opend it ,this door i had never seen befor. So as i went into the room i shut the door and sat down my cloak . There was a mirror standing there i went over to it and saw me dad and me mum Standing beside me. Me mum put her hand on my back i reached back and felt nothing. Well i hurried and ran upstairs to Ron and said Ron ,Ron come look. So i grabed him half asleep and ran back to the mirror and stood him in front where i had stood befor. I said see thats me mum and as i was getting ready to say dad Ron said ',Blody Brilent its me holding the house cup and Bloddy hell im Captin of the Quddich team ,hey i looked good. Ron asked me do u think this holds the future ?, i said how could it both of my parents are dead. Ron went back up to sleep and i was still sitting there in front of the mirror Pr. Dumbordor was standing behinde me,he said One sat infront of this mirrior to much and he said something else but i wasnt listening. He said dont come looking for it agin it will be moved. and i went back upstairs to my room . Ron wock me up and said get up hurry im hugry lets go eat. I put on some cloths and went with him but i didnt eat , i sat by the fire and ron came over to me and said wanna play chess ,i said no , wanna vistit Haggrid? I also said no Ron said i know what youre thinking but we cant we just cant.


A Storyteller Topic - The Mirror of Erised
The Mirror of Erised shows you the things you want the most. For Harry, it showed him his parents. If you looked into the Mirror of Erised, what would it show you - what is your hearts desire.

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