The Fear part l
Author: patrick
From: chicago, USA
Age: 12
Date: 19th Sep 2002, 6:52 AM
Rating: 3
Comment:
Title: The Fear part l
max ran trew the woods as the pack of wolfs chased him 'jessie'! Yelled max
as he jumped in to a big huge cave that was nearly dark sice the sun began to set.
Max took big breaths sice he just got threw being chased by a pack of man eating wolves.
Jessie ran into the cave huffing and puffing, she had bloody slashes across her face.Jessie
was a blode girl with blue eyes, and now she had a big blood slsh across her face.Max ran up to her
'jessie what happen' said max holding her chin and exsamining the scracth that would definetly leave
a big scare.Max and jessie were both 15 years old and that stuck up for each other like brother and sister boy friend and girl friend.
But they were not either of them , they were just friends who been friends for 9 years.Jessie sat down 'max, we need to get out of this
forest it is very creepy'said jessie 'we will, ok I promise you' said max as his blue eyes met hers.max also had blonde hair just like
jessie but they werent related.Max sat down next to her 'we are going to survive and that is everything I got to tell you because I
aint going to let us get killed by Dr.sloth, this forest might belong to him but i am going to get that key to get threw the door'said max
as he stared into her blue eyes that use to sparkle but were now dim .We will get out ,was all that went trew maxs head.Then there was
a burst of green light 'max help'yelled jessie 'where are you' yelled max over the loud crashing and screeching.Then there was silence
and max looked over to see a empty spot where jessie once sat.Max stood up 'jessie, jessie jessieeee'!! Now hi best friend had dissapeard,max got up to beall alone in the dark cave.
TO BE COUNTINUED
PRODUCED BY PATRICK & WWW.EDBYDESIGN
NEXT TIME ON THE FEAR:WILL MAX GET JESSIE AND ECSCAPE READ THE NEXT PART TO THE FEAR.
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