Thomas Reeves: unwanted
Author: Dreamer
From: Blackpool, United Kingdom
Age: 12
Date: 9th Nov 2002, 4:59 AM
Rating: 1
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Title: Thomas Reeves: unwanted
Do you know that the lord of the rings has a poem at the beginning of it? Wall my story has a saying at the beginning of it that saying is;
You see a baby drifting down the river in a basket. You want him. Pick him up and love him, he will become yours. Let him be swept away by the current and he will become like me.
It is basically about a boy that was abandoned at birth and rejected by others in life. Everyone that he ever loved dies and in the end he thinks: all that love has ever brought me is pain. So he turns evil. And when his girl friend betrays him he shoots himself because that was the last straw.
This is the last part of the last chapter of the story that I have not finished because it is going to be a long one.
There was a small cry from upstairs the cry of a 20-year-old girl. Her white robes were so heavily draped around her that here shoulder’s where bare. She was kneeling down as if praying and the ones cream coloured floor was now a deep crimson colour from the blood coming from her hands.
“No tom pleas no!” she muted to the tall man standing in front of her. The man knelt down besides her and gently stroked her hair.
“Shhhhh” he said
“Pleas Tom! It hurts ‘o’ it hurts!” She cried softly
“It is hurting me more than it is hurting you Tara.” He laughed hard
“It is hurting ME more than it hurts you!” he repeated. He bent even closer to the girl and gently brushed his lips against hers, but instead of kissing her he slapped her across her face. The girl fell to the floor.
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