Thomas Reeves: unwanted part two
Author: Dreamer
From: Blackpool, United Kingdom
Age: 12
Date: 9th Nov 2002, 5:09 AM
Rating: 5
Comment:
Title: Thomas Reeves: unwanted part two
(To Editor(s)pleas do not rait thas story in tell you have read the first part!)
Part too
“You betray me Tara! That is why I can not trust you.” He said pointing at her “and for that I must get my revenge.” He whispered
“Now you know I don’t forgive and you know I don’t take kindly to those that betray me.” Said threateningly
“I know tom I know.” The girl whimpered
“Then why do it?” he said. His eyes had turned scarlet with anger from their usual bright purple state.
“I don’t want to be bad tom I don’t!” this time she had gone too far.
“You have been in with us for three years now! Why the sudden change of character? Isn’t that long enough to now you don’t get away with anything with me!”
“No tom. Pleas, pleas no.” she whispered.
“Begging won’t work Tara!” tom explained. “If you turn your back away from us now there is no knowing what secrets you may reveal. You can not be trusted Tara.”
I swear Tom, I won’t.” she said
“Don’t love me anymore do you Tara? He spat. “Don’t answer that. What you have done says it all. Actions speak louder than words Tara.” He said. The girl shuffled back against the wall and with watery eye’s she stared at the man that she once loved.
Tom put his hand in his inside pocket.
“This is hurting me more than it is you Tara.” He said as he puled out a gun.
“Goodbye Tara.” He said and pulled the trigger.
‘BANG’
There was silence, all apart from the small cry of a 20-year-old girl.
For those that do not get it Tom (Thomas) just shot himself.
Im not a fan of happy endings. I like to be diferent.
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