Who is she chapter.4
A Great Stories About Anything Story By Amanda, 14 From Gold Coast
Author: Amanda
From: Gold Coast, Australia
Age: 14
Date: 3rd Dec 2002, 6:16 PM
Rating: 4
Comment: An interesting storyline Amanda, keep up the good work. Editor
Title: Who is she chapter.4
Kate looked at the photo it was a girl at a 14th birthday party blowing out candles. The girl had long black hair & blue eye's.
'One promblem this girl has blue eye's?' Kate asked.
'But the thing is her eye colour changes escipally in photo's' Greg said.
'Oh yes she's such a gorgeous dear' The mother said.
'I couldn't agree more Jane' Greg said to his wife.
Kate couldn't really believe them , she wasn't so sure but how else was she meant to get prof the poor girl has lost her memory.
'Mum , i never thought this would happen to little Jill i wish had of told her that i (gulp) loved her' Derik said.
'Escume just a word with him be back in a mintue' Jane said.
'Yes Mr.G Rust what were your daughter's favourite hobbies? and how old is your daughter?' Kate asked leaning back on her chair studying the photo & Greg.
Derik walked in to where Jill was.
'Look , listin to me you , you do what i tell you to your name is Jill , you are fifften your birthday is coming up & im your brother Derik you live in Austrlia on the gold coast understand me?' Derik said hitting her shoulder.
'Ah..yes' The girl knew that she had to agree although she didn't know what was happening.
'Derik , Kate said to bring Jill to the proof room with you , bring her luggage' Jane said.
'Yes mum and that's your mum & the next man you see in the proof room is your dad okay?' Derik said.
'Okay' Derik brought himself ,her & his luggage back to the prof room.
'This is for the best' He whispered.
'Oh Girl i mean Jill , is this you?' Kate asked.
'Looks like it' Jill said.
'Well this is your mum , your dad & your brother' they all smiled but Derik smirked at her.
'Yes ah hi'Jill said.
'Her birthday is when did you say?' Kate asked.
'the 15th of December' Greg said.
'Right your birthday of december?' Kate said.
'Ah...i don't know but they do know alot ..about me so they must be my family'.
'Be right back' Kate said.
'Dr.Carter this the prof they've told me' She explained all the proof 'But i don't think the really are her parents should i let her go & let them take her' Kate said.
'15 year old Jill his obvisly their daughter & Derik's her 17 older brother , there's nothing you can't prof there's nothing else you can do let Jill be with her family' Dr.Carter said.
Kate walked back to the room.
'So are we allowed to take her home?' Greg asked looking worried alongside his wife & son.
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