Tommy Mc Crown
Author: Bneton
From: Fort St John British Columbia, Canada
Age: 13
Date: 13th Dec 2002, 10:38 AM
Rating: 5
Comment:
Title: Tommy Mc Crown
There once was a kingdom far, far away, that was dirty and wretched some would say. But deep in the city the heart of the town, there lived a small boy named Tommy Mc Crown.
He wasn’t real rich or have lots of toys, but he made lots of friends with the girls and boys. Now Tommy may not be as lucky as some, but he was real smart, no way was he dumb!
So he used his wits to out smart the knights, he avoided the guards and the street lights. Tommy snuck into the fortress walls, and tried not to listen to the prisoners calls.
Tommy slipped through the dungeon cracks, and found shelter under the royal sacks. He heard the clanking of the knights golden plates, there was no way out, he couldn’t escape!
He held his breath and tried to stay still. He knew that the knights were trained to kill. When the knights passed and the halls were clear, he ran through the king’s chambers and stole what he held dear. He took the crown of his majesty the king, and broke his harp so it would no longer sing.
But then the door flew ajar! It was the great monk Zach Amar. Seeing what Tommy held in his hands, Zach cried out to god and trough out the lands!
Tommy Mc Crown was killed the next day he could have been smart he could have been great! But he wasted his life for the kings golden crown, hoping he could sell it some where in town.
You don’t need money to be the best. Remember who loves you and your family crest. So I say these words to warn you, Tom had friends and he was loved, but now he’s gone…
A Storyteller Topic - Kids Are Poets Too
Poetry is a great way to express yourself, whether you're feeling down or on top of the world. There are many different types of poems and remember, they don't have to rhyme.
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