Who is she? chapter.6
Author: Amanda
From: Gold Coast, Australia
Age: 14
Date: 18th Dec 2002, 9:43 AM
Rating: 4
Comment:
Title: Who is she? chapter.6
Jill unpacked her stuff , it was very hot in this room & hard to breath as there were no window's that you could open.
The only way you could survive was gasp for breath every ten seconds.
Once Jill was done she needed to get a drink she walked out of the room as Derik was walking by.
'Where do you think your going?' He pushed her back inside.
'I need a drink' She said gasping for breath.
'Well i'll get you some water but you can't come out' He said.
Why can't she come out? Jill thought.
Is this really her family do they really treat her this bad?
Jill couldn't remember much back at the hospital only that she accepted them to be her family.
Then it clicked Derik had told her to agree with them very nasitly.
Maybe they were her family though & that was the only way they could get her to come home?
Jill had no idea but why were they so cruel to her?
Derik came back 'Here's your water no more'.
Derik stood & watched as Jill gulped down the water.
Then Jill had to ask 'Why can't i come out?'
'Because no-one can know your'
'Why not?' She asked.
'I don't know ask my i mean our parents , you've been in here since you were a baby' He said raising his eyebrow's.
'How is that possible i can hardly breath in here?' Jill asked.
'That's because you fell off your bike & couldn't remember anything you bruised your eye , your nose , throat & your brain well you actually hurt your brain & made it lose memory , you weren't wearing a helmet so you were lucky you survived' Derik said , this story seemed so unreal , Jill would have died wouldn't she? or maybe she was lucky.
Jill was rather confused but she'd lost her memory so she thought she really had fallen of a bike with no helmet & thought it was possible she just said 'Okay then' & handed the glass to Derik.
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