Who is she? Chapter.11
A Great Stories About Anything Story By Amanda, 14 From Gold Coast
Author: Amanda
From: Gold Coast, Australia
Age: 14
Date: 7th Jan 2003, 10:11 PM
Rating: 3
Comment:
Title: Who is she? Chapter.11
'DERIK TELL ME!'Jill begged.
'I'll tell you in the morning' He said as he went to walk away
'I've already lost my memory what makes you think im going to remember in the morning?' Jill asked.
'i guess not' Derik looked at her her curious face awating for an honest answer.
Derik couldn't tell her the truth but he thought what to tell her his heart racing fast he didn't really want to lie to her she's just a sweet incconet young girl.
Derik had to say something though this girl did need an answer atleast he thought.
'It's your father Greg you know OUR dad?' He lied.
'Oh okay then why did you want to tell me in the morning?' Jill asked her green eye's staring into his ocen deep blue eye's.
'Im just really tired' He lied again , he was actually up to get something to eat and he only came down here because he heard Jill's squeals.
'Ah got to go to bed night' He said and walked off his heat beating rapidly , his head pounding.
Jill just lay under her ripped sheet with a calm heart and curious brain.
Next morning when Derik woke up his mum said 'Morning Derik would you like some coco pops?'
'You know i don't eat coco pops i like nutrigrain and choclate milk and after that a nice slice of rockmelon' Derik said grabbing the milk out of the fridge.
'Oh sorry dear' She said sitting at the table.
As he dad came and sat at the table and ordered his wife Jane for a bowel of weetbixs and two peices of toast with jam on top he looked at Derik with his brown droopy eye's with bags underneath he said 'So?'
'What?' Derik asked.
'Im just making a conversation' His dad seemed really tired and miserable.
'Okay then well dad oh yeah Jill has had two flashbacks she asked me who the er man was with the goatie i told her it was you , you know when like you were younger she believes it' Derik confrimed him.
'Thanks boy well where's my breakfeast?' He barked.
'Here it is dear you toast is on the way , Derik could you please take this down to Jill' She handed him some food.
Derik nodded and headed down to Jill's basement room.
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