Who is she? Chapter.13
Author: Amanda
From: Gold Coast, Australia
Age: 14
Date: 9th Jan 2003, 6:48 PM
Rating: 3
Comment:
Title: Who is she? Chapter.13
Jane came running down to the basment where the other three stood in her red night gown with blue and pink printed flowers on it her curly blonde hair bouncing on and off her shoulders.
'I heard the squeals about your coffe? isn't Derik paying attet-' Jane went go on but Jill interuptted.
'Where's my present?' Jill asked and smiled.
'My dear what are you talking about?' Jane asked.
'It's my birthday remember? you get a present on your birthday?' Jill asked and smiled.
'Oh but you see dear we don't have enough money' Jane said and patted her shoulder.
'Oh that's okay' Jill sighed cuddled her pillow put on a puppy face and said 'I thought you would have wanted me to remember the first present i remember that you got me so i can remember what a lovely family i have' Jill sighed.
'We got you that barbie that you named after your mum remember?' Greg coughed.
'Nope don't remember' Jill sighed.
Jane & Greg couldn't hold back now ,
Derik licked his lips and bit his bottom lip and tounge.
'We'll go get ready to go out now and get you your present' Jane said.
'What about my coffe?' Greg asked.
'Well get you one from Mcdonald's on the way' Jane said.
Greg nodded as the two walked off.
Derik smiled at Jill 'Wow your coul considering you've lost your memory and all' Derik said.
'Thankyou that's the one thing i'll know i'll never forget sucking up escpially now' Jill was going to add so i can remember my real family because she was very suspicous of these three and didn't know weather to believe they were telling the truth or not but she didn't incase Derik talked his parents out of buying her present.
'Go on go with them and make sure they get me something nice' Jill smiled and hit him on the back.
As they were out shopping for a present for Jill.
Jill decided instead of sititng in the basment all the time she'd creep out and find some other places in the house you know just check it out.
Before she got up to leave Baxter jumped right in.
'Hey Baxter what's up boy? you better not be in here' She patted his nose 'Goodboy' then she wacked his nose 'Get Out go on go!' and Baxter left right away winging then panting again straight after.
Jill walked up three steeps and she was in the lounge room.
A wide screen tv with a silver huge stero.
a small light on the wall Jill flicked on the light it was rather bright.
There was also a thing that said PS2 meaning playstation two.
There was also a black rough couch that Jill sank into.
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