Crucio
Author: Dreamer
From: Blackpool, United Kingdom
Age: 12
Date: 26th Feb 2003, 11:20 AM
Rating: 5
Comment:
Title: Crucio
Authors note: - This twisted little ficlet is based on lord Voldemort placing the crucatus curs on someone. As in Nemesis’s story ‘I Am Lord Voldemort’ (probably the best fan fic out there) Nemeses points out that surly, enough blows of the crucatus curse can kill some one as it is good enough to make the Longbottom’s turn mental. I know it is a bit dark but I am trying to mature my writing if I want to become god. When I turn 13 (in July) you won’t see much of my fics hear anymore because I will publish them on a site that allows really dark and violent fan fics (trust me this is very milled) but so far I just getting the hang of writing in first person. Hear Voldemort explains why he is killing this person. Why dose my writing always sound so childish? Probably because I am a child but if you can not understand the reason why he kills the person its because I’m a lousy writer. Besides, its only three paragraphs long! <<<
Crucio
It’s no easy task. Once it is done it is impossible to forget, but not to regret…
CRUCIO
I can hear you scream I can hear you beg I know exactly what you are saying. I am not listening but know… I’ve heard it all before…
No… no, please, don’t hurt me pleas…
I don’t know why I put up with it
Let go… pleas stop, I beg you, pleas…
But I don’t stop and I do put up with it as it is a joy to me… to hear you scream and hear you beg and know exactly what you are saying even when I am not listening…
You scream…
CRUCIO
Falling… to the floor you hit the ground cease but go on further, deeper maybe to hell no its even past that…it hurts please stop? You cry But I won’t I will carry on. It burns it freezes it squeezes and clasps it brakes and splinters and stabs its torture it consumes you, it transfigures you to dust as fine as powder burning knives penetrate your body, pierce your skin, just die… just die, you wish. It consumes you takes you in and turns you in to something like its self it twists and turns in to your body, locks itself to your nerves devastating you and taking you in, Intel you surrender to it. It will take you fully and you will be nothing. So I’ll help you…
It’s a Sensation of crucifixion… death is the easy way out. If only the path was not blocked for this present duration for you, but not for me…
TO BE CONTINUED<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
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