Crucio part 2
Author: Dreamer
From: Blackpool, United Kingdom
Age: 12
Date: 26th Feb 2003, 11:23 AM
Rating: 5
Comment:
Title: Crucio part 2
Authors note: - This twisted little ficlet is based on lord Voldemort placing the crucatus curs on someone. As in Nemesis’s story ‘I Am Lord Voldemort’ (probably the best fan fic out there) Nemeses points out that surly, enough blows of the crucatus curse can kill some one as it is good enough to make the Longbottom’s turn mental. I know it is a bit dark but I am trying to mature my writing if I want to become god. When I turn 13 (in July) you won’t see much of my fics hear anymore because I will publish them on a site that allows really dark and violent fan fics (trust me this is very milled) but so far I just getting the hang of writing in first person. Hear Voldemort explains why he is killing this person. Why dose my writing always sound so childish? Probably because I am a child but if you can not understand the reason why he kills the person its because I’m a lousy writer. Besides, its only three paragraphs long! <<<
Crucio continued:-
CRUCIO
Its so hysterical it makes me laugh but I have to stop then and then you are the one who regrets it as you know what will happen just as I knew what was happening
“No pleas no!” you muter to me as I stand in front of you. I kneel down besides you “Shhhhh” I say
“Pleas It hurts ‘o’ it hurts!” you cried softly
“It is hurting me more than it is hurting you.” I laugh hard
You try to convince yourself you make yourself believe that this is not how it ends but deep down you know that this is how you will exit your life. But trust me I am doing you a favour I am mealy pointing you in the rite direction… I stop and you regret it. How you begged for me to kill you is not death the easiest way out? You said so your self and I will help you take the right path.
Why, you ask I’ll tell you why. It is because life is abyss for them with out power. I know that because I gained my power after a period of my early life with out it. I started of like you will now finish and their will come a time where you will make others suffer for the torment that you have been through. I am older than you are and have been through this you see… that is why. I shall only ever die willingly as death is a gift I am willing to take. But you scream and beg for forgiveness though you have done nothing to be forgiven for. That is why I do this to you. To reward you I am good we are all good everyone of us and I will help you as that is what I was put on this earth to do…
CRUCIO
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