Aquatron and The City of Atlantice

Author: Brandon
From: Kingwood, USA
Age: 12
Date: 29th May 2000, 6:51 PM
Rating: 5
Comment:
Title: Aquatron and The City of Atlantice

In a far away galaxy there was a planet that was made of only water. It was not a rounded shape planet but a diamond shaped planet. The planet was called Aquarius. There were many habitants on this planet but the most powerful were sea creature like no other. They had magical powers beyond any threw out the galaxy’s. The creatures were called Aquarions. They were named after the wondrous planet. Well one day in the town called Sea Anomy were the king Ocinto (O-seen-toe) lived his son named Aquatron was wondering around. He was 12 years old and tomorrow would be his birthday. On his 13’Th birthday he will be able to have powers. But to get powers you have to train real hard.

Aquatron was real scared about his powers. He did not know what it would feel like to have power like no other. To form a star that would shine the brightest threw out the universe so every one could see. Or how it would feel to be able to communicate with different animals telepathically. He wanted to know what all of that would feel like but he was scared. Well any ways he was at this one magic shop in the town and he found this most mysterious object. It seemed to be a aqua colored wand that was about 1 foot 6 inches long. It was so mysterious because it had an inscription on it that was a different language that no one had seen before. He wanted that wand real bad. But it was a little to big for Aquatron. But he thought that he could grow in to it. So he asked the lady at the front desk how much it was. She answered back *122. You see * means Sea Money.

That is how much it is? Yes Sir Aquatron. I will take it. You will?!?!?! Yes I will take the magic wand! Aquatron was so happy that he actually had something that he liked. He got many presents for his birthday but he did not like all of them. Aquatron swam out of the magic store and went to his castle that was as big as 5 mansions built together. And it was higher than the empire state building. It changed colors so it had no spasific color. And it was the enterace to Atlantice. But they just did not know it. Well any ways Aquatron came into the castle and he yelled out father father! Come look what I got at The Magic shop. Well what is it? It is a magic wand! Well you got plenty of wands. Why do you like this wand so much? Well father it is sertainly not coming from a sea creature. And it is not to wide for me. And it is not to long well mabey a little long for me but I will grow into it. And all the other wands were from the dollar magic shop.

Well Aquatron remember it is the thought that counts. Well, they have *5,000,000,000.95 and they could not even get me a descent wand. Well I guess you are right but do not tell them that. It would hurt their feelings. You know how touchy they get. Well they are expecting thank you cards from you. So why don’t you start on them. All right father, I guess I will. Aquatron went up the huge staircase that was filled with pictures of his relatives and all the other kings of Aquarius. And on the ceiling there were many stars that each prince formed when they turned 13. They were not as bright as how Aquatron had imagined. But they still looked wonderful. Aquatron finaly reached the top of the staircase and went to his room at the end of the hall. He opened his door that had pearls and diamonds and rubys in side of it. The door knob was mad of pure crystal in a diamond shape. Well his room was as big as a two story house. His room had an upstairs. That was the nice part of his room. And there were many secret passa

Well Aquatron went up stair in his room to a room which was for writing. He liked to write lots of stories. He wished to be an author when he was a child. But his parents thought that he was joking but he said he was being serious and Aquatron was locked in his room for a month. They wanted him to be a great king not a king that wrote stories. You see Aquatron was the only child so there was a lot of pressure on him to be a great king. Aquatron got out some paper and a pen then started to write.

Dearest Aunt Anoshia,
Thank you for the wonderful gift. I love it so much. No one got me a wand but you. I will always use it.
And I will become a great magician with the wand you gave me.

Yours truly,
Aquatron

I am going to finish the letters later Aquatron said to him self. What should I do Aquatron thought to him self. I know! I can search the room that I found earlier. Aquatron raced to his closet then knocked on the wall three times then his wall to his closet separated and out formed a door. He then opened the old wooden dorr and he went inside to see a room that was empty! What happened to everything? Then Aquatron found another door. He opened it and then he got sucked up by this blue whirling vortex. It was about 10 feet tall.

Aquatron was flying threw space and into different galaxy's. He could touch the stars and flew past planets. But then he fell out of a planet's sky. He hit the ground of and ocean. Then he found him self on a welcoming sign that said Welcom To Atlantice! Had this been the Lost City of Atlantice thought Aquatron. But this is in another galaxy. It couldn't. Aquatron got up and when passed the sign and asked a sea creature excuse me but where am I? The sea creature looked at him weirdly and said You are in Atlantice! Where do you come from and who are you? Or I should say what are you! I am Prince Aquatron from the planet Aquarius and the town called Sea Anomy. And I am an Aquarion. I should be asking what you are! Aquatron said. Why I am a Alitence (A-lie-tense). Every one is!

How did you get here? Well I am not sure my self. I found this secret room in my castle and everything was gone in the room. Then I found another door and opened it and whent threw a vortex. Oh you are the son of Ocinto! I am sorry I did not know. How did you know my father? Well he is helping us in a war that we are having with another planet. He gave us all of the Jewlery and gold in that room you were talking about and sent it to us threw the vortex.

Wow you are in a war with a planet. Which one? Well look up. You see that big round object in the sky? Yes! Well that is the planet! But you have no chance at winning against that big planet! Well actualy we have a prophacy that one day a prince from the planet Aquarius would come down the day before his 13'Th birthday and save us from the planet Zurgon. And well, I think that prince is you. But I know nothing about magic yet. All I have is this magic wand that I bought. I don't know what it says right there though. What were did you find that! That is the sacret wand from the great ruler also named Aquatron.

He died a long time ago but before he died he said this, I must go now but before I leave forever I have to warn you about this. In the futur there will be the greates war there will ever be with us and the planet Zergon. The sea creature who will bring back my sacret wand will be the saver of The City of Atlantice. Even though he may apear small he has great power's with in him self.

That is what he said. You must be our saver! Wait one second I have one question. Isn't Atlantice a city? Yes. Well why can't your planet help you? Well we are the only city that is still standing with life. The rest of the planet is destroyed. But we soon will rebuild the planet and form it into a big comunity and the planet will be called Atlantice instead of one city. Wow you guys are in that bad of shape. How do I gain my power? I don't even know how. Well you must see the great king. He will help you train.

To Be Continued..................


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