Lost soul

Author: Nicki 92
From: ?, Australia
Age: 10
Date: 26th May 2003, 11:13 PM
Rating: 5
Comment:
Title: Lost soul

note: this is for a poetry competition and the topic is moving on. I have another poem and I don't know which one is better. i will post it up soon so if you wish could we please help me choose? I'm awfully indesicive you see.


I am a lost soul
no one to look to
no one to believe
no one to follow
Feeling ever hollow
the path is wearing thin
lost in a barren terrain
of desert
curled up in a ball
trapped
The only protection
from the harsh heat
is the shirt on my back
Confusion beating hard on me
my sheild has gone
Fighting my way through thorns and anger
I lost my path
bliss I left behind
Every feeling drained
from my heart
Every spark lost
from my eye
Everything
gone
everything
destroyed by icy sadness
and firey ire
Nothing to trust
Nothing to help me walk
in the right direction
Only voices
screams and yells
and everyone is moving
I'm Losing control
of my own life
I am a lost soul

But whatever problem faced
whatever hinderance blocks my path
is able to be overcome
friends
and family
I've lost
love
and care
I've lost
but heart
and soul
I've found
and though I sit here thirsty for love
There is nothing to do
Cannot bring back the dead
cannot change what has happened
but the world is moving on

I was a lost soul
my faith drowned in the fires
of ire
but life returns
to this empty heart
I was a lost soul
but now I am found


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