The CAVE OF DOOM !!!!! The corrected version
Author: bill
From: prineville, USA
Age: 12
Date: 24th Jul 2003, 12:18 PM
Rating: 5
Comment:
Title: The CAVE OF DOOM !!!!! The corrected version
My friends dared me to go into this very spooky cave and spend a night there.The night after that,I went in the cave with my sleeping bag. It was spooky and water was dripping off the ceiling of the cave.It was cold and musky,so I found a dry spot on the ground and rolled out my sleepingbag and went to sleep. A strange noise that sounded like a call for help woke me up,so I got out of bed to see what it was. I looked around the cave but I could not see anything because it was so dark. I walked deeper into the cave and somehow I ended up in a dim lighted room. Everything looked gray. All of a sudden these strange looking kids popped out from hiding. They were wearing 60`s clothes and they looked gray too. I thought it was the lighting but it wasn`t. I asked them,'what is this place?' They told me that they were the class of 1969 and that they somehow slipped into another realm called the gray realm. An hour or so later after they were done teling me about the gray realm, I started turning grey. One girl had a tube of red lipstick that hadn't turned gray yet. She gave it to me.'I figured a way out',I told them. They all cheered. I took the lipstick and colored a hole big enough to crawl through. The red color turned into a hole into the outer dimension. I asked them if they were going to go with me. They said no, because they were a little behind the times. So I said goodbye and crawled out through the hole and ran out of the cave as fast as I could. THE END.
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