Doomed
Author: Tara
From: Sacramento, USA
Age: 13
Date: 29th May 2004, 5:58 AM
Rating: 5
Comment:
Title: Doomed
As I walked into a cave,
I felt my adrenaline flow ,
I felt my heart pump blood rapidly as
I hear the thump of my footsteps on the
rigid ground . I tasted the harsh flavor of the room
as it has been here for generations , I thought of the
nation or civilisation that once walked on this ground.
I gradually removed my foot from the shrunken lath .
I walked past the walls as they have been scarred with
the flushed colors of the images that my ancestors once
drew. As I felt all of the emotion diminishing off the
top of my head , I sensed that this cave must have
another significance, that behind those walls must be
something else than the substance that we were meant to
see. I heard a crash behind me so I raced to the
beginning of my end . This mistake was one that was not
easy to avoid but I remembered that if I hadn't ran into
this cave, the mob was going to grab hold of me .
So as I thought of my doom , I saw a light , a light
so unique, like nothing I have ever seen before, I ran
to it , I brushed my worries away and smilled as my
death was to be prosponed ! I galloped in joy but before
my foot moved the light dimned and slowly absorbed into
the darkness . ' No ' I screamed , ' NOOOOOOOO ' I
screamed in pain ! I felt my oxygen decrease and my
blood rush .. Was this the end ??
TO Be continued
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