MGPJ: Aloha's Departure
Author: Raitwo
From: Lancaster, USA
Age: 10
Date: 5th Aug 2004, 5:49 PM
Rating: 4
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Title: MGPJ: Aloha's Departure
Pokedex Initiation Progressing
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Chapter ID: 327
It was sunrise. Our Pokemon had arrived in the nice little Village of Pallet Town.
'Return, Articuno and Moltres!' I yelled. Professor Oak cheered when he saw us.
'My lab systems are working perfectly again! I can repay you... by giving you these special tickets to Hoenn. And here's the ticket to Sunburst Island, Aloha,' Professor Oak said.
I received the 3 tickets. They were for me, Dalton and Serena.
'Hey Professor?' I said.
'Yes, Jordan?' The professor asked.
'My Pokemon are getting too powerful for Hoenn. I want to start fresh, except for my bud Raichu.'
Professor Oak smiled. 'I understand. I'll take your 5 Pokemon and transport them to Bill's computer. Now, it's been nice and all, but I need to get back to research.
I nodded. 'Yeah!'
Professor Oak said, 'That means it's time to say goodbye! Hope your Hoenn adventures are bright!'
We all smiled, but then we turned to Aloha. 'You're leaving tonight,' Serena said.
Aloha nodded. 'Yes. Well, it's been a good time. Let's enjoy this last day together.'
We all smiled.
Suddenly, my Mom tore out of her home.
'Please come quick, honeys!'
Dalton and I rushed towards her.
'You coming, Serena?' Dalton asked.
Serena said, 'Yeah!'
'There's a Pokemon eating in my garden! Please help me out!' My mom was trying to shoo away a small, reddish puffy Pokemon with a broom.
'It's a Hoppip!' I yelled. 'Raichu! Use Quick Attack!'
Raichu leapt at Hoppip with blinding speed.
Hoppip was knocked over. It was a very weak Pokemon, so the Quick Attack did a lot of damage. However, the Hoppip began to glow green.
'Raaaii!' Raichu fell to the ground, drained of energy.
'That was a Giga Drain attack!' Serena shouted.
Hoppip was replenished. Then Hoppip began to smack at Raichu.
'That's a Double Slap!' I gasped.
'Do something quick!' Dalton yelled.
'Raichu! Try a Thunderbolt!'
Raichu tried, but Hoppip was slapping him from side to side. Finally, Hoppip began to tire down and got slower. Raichu managed to jump backwards from one slap.
Raichu was now far enough away to fire a Thunderbolt.
It struck Hoppip!
'Pokeball, go!' I shouted. The Hoppip was caught!
'Now, I'll go back to Prof. Oak's lab to return the Hoppip! I don't want another Pokemon until I get my Hoenn starter!'
Later...
Hours had passed, until it was sunset.
All 4 of us trainers were gathered at the southern beach of pallet, as a ferry came by. We jumped on. Prof. Oak and Mom were watching us from afar.
'Goodbye!' I waved to them. The ferry started moving away, until my mom and dad were very small. Almost specks.
I could see their arms rising up, still, like little tiny sticks. I waved for one last time.
But we were already away. All four of us on the boat.
The boat rocked through the ocean.
Aloha said, 'Well, the ferry will stop at Sunburst Island for me... in half an hour.'
We waited. Soon, the island came in view. As we got closer, we saw the dock.
As the boat pulled up, Aloha walked down the lane and off the ferry, onto the dock. She waved at us.
'Bye!' al three of us shouted.
Aloha waved, until we passed the dock, and could see her no more.
I looked back, one last time, then turned.
The 3 trainers from pallet...
Serena, famous for being a mighty Eon trainer.
Dalton, famous for being an evil mastermind at one point.
And me. Famous... for being a Pokemon Master, overall.
We were set for Hoenn.
(Well, it's finally Hoenn! After 327 long, tired chapters, and 2 1/2 years of typing [not to mention cramping my hands], we are finally set to Hoenn, which is basically a new beginning. Thanks to the Editor, and many more people, for supporting me. In chapter 328, we will finally arrive in the land of new beginnings. I hope you've enjoyed the ride! P.S.: I have finally beaten the number of chapters. The Pokemon Show has only 312 chapters, but I have gotten to 328, in less time than the Pokemon Show. Well, enjoy the new land of Hoenn, and SEE YOU ALL IN HOENN!)
To be continued... a new beginning...
A Storyteller Topic - Pokemon Adventures
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