the never ending cave
Author: anstasia paylor
From: detroit, USA
Age: 10
Date: 17th May 2005, 10:50 AM
Rating: 4
Comment:
Title: the never ending cave
As I walked into the cave it was pitch black. All you could hear was yourself and the sound of dripping water. It was so dark that I couldn’t tell were I was going left or right. At first I thought I should have stopped walking but I thought if I could just keep walking then I could find my way out. As I walked I was caught at a dead end. I could turn around but I don’t know were I’m going. All of a sudden I heard a noise over my head. I felt like I could feel its breath on me. I turned around all I saw were yellow eyes and heard a growling noise. Even though I couldn’t see I was out of there and running. When I stopped to turn around to see if the thing was still there. However I still wasn’t out of the cave. I was in another cave!
However at least this one had lights. I was hoping that I was going to find my way out. When I looked around there were so many lanterns all on the walls on the ground and on the ceiling. But a few minutes later everything started to shine and sparkle when all the lanterns went out. I didn’t notice but this cave whole cave was made of crystals! The colors were so beautiful and magnificent. They were purple and pink and white. I never knew that crystals could shine when lights go off. I could finally see my way with the crystals shining. I was at another dead end! I was so mad that I kicked down the wall! No, really I kicked down the wall. No!!!! It’s another cave! The first thing that hit was a gang of bats and a pebble hit my head. I nearly got flung up in the air. The next thing I knew rocks started to fall from the top of the cave from the commotion of the bats. They were small rocks anyway so I didn’t worry. However I started to worry if I was ever going to get out of here. Maybe I might have to chew on rocks for the rest of my life!! I might never live to see the day ever again. “Maybe” but as soon as I got cut off by a growling sound I really started to worry.
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