To Raquaza
Author: Jolteonrules555#2
From: Derry, USA
Age: 11
Date: 18th Oct 2006, 5:39 PM
Rating: 1
Comment:
Title: To Raquaza
Could Jack try to stop Brendan from going but brendan brushes him away,anbd when Brendan reached Ash Jack gets in front and tries to stop him and gets in a battle with him,and wins,but Brendan isn't satisfied(you can do the rest).I have noticed Jack almost never talks,almost never does anything,never gets mentioned besides doing what other people are doing,He isn't the following type,he usually wants to do what he wants to do(he almost never does what other people do),ex:All the other guys went to the classroom but Jack went over to Ash to confert him.Sorta like that.Please make Jack be mentioned more and does more.
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