A Magical Day!
Author: Jessica
From: Amherstburg, Canada
Age: 11
Date: 8th Jul 2001, 3:46 PM
Rating: 5
Comment:
Title: A Magical Day!
Once Upon a time there were 2 brothers.Their names are John and Paul they both loved to fish so as an ordinary day they went off to their own little dock they had built their selves.
Now this day was very strange they didn't catch 1 FISH!!! the two of them were very surprised.When they finally decided to say ' This has been enough for one day '
There was a small tug on John's pole then Paul immedietely grabbed the net.
Then John said 'Help I don't think i can take this thing on myself!!!!' So Paul joined on to his brother and then the next thing they new they were going under water with this HUMUNGUS GIANT FISH!!!!! The only thing they could think of was how long can they hold their breath and where in the world was this fish taking them???
After a few minutes had gone by the two brothers realized that they were in a big under water city but, they could actually breathe like they were on shore.The two of them did not know what to say then all of a sudden a fish came up to them and said...yes it said 'Hello and welcome to the Magical World of Fish,You have been the chosen ones from our friend George,the fish who pulled you under to have an hour to explore and look in our magical place.'
'Then' said another fish 'You will be pulled up back to your surface and you will remember nothing at all!'
'WOW!' they both said 'Lets go!!'
So the two brothers took off and explored this new land and found many different fish and tons of shells!!.After they were done looking around George,the fish came up to them and said, 'Its time to go now'
So John and Paul held on to the humugus fish's fins and headed up to the surface and when they got back up to their place it was true they did not remember a thing except for the two shells they had in their hands!!
THE END BY Jessica Labrecque
Amherstburg Ontario
Age:11
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